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EVERY STORY DESERVES 

a Second Pass

Your story deserves a reader who pays attention.

I look at what made me lean in with anticipation, what made my mind drift, what made me feel, and the questions I couldn't stop asking.

Then I help you understand why.

Where Are You in Your Story?

1

I finished my draft.
Now what?

Come sit with me. Tell me about your story, what you love about it, and what you hope your readers find in the pages. We can start there.

2

Something isn't working.

You can feel it in the words, but you just can't figure out why. Tell me what you needed the story to do. Let's find the point where it stopped doing that.

3

I need another set of eyes.

Totally understandable! Reader Questions, Continuity Questions, or that tiny detail you swear you explained 200 pages ago? I'll find it.

Reader Experience Review

I read for the experience.

A story is more than words on a page. It's the moment you realize you've been reading for an hour.

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​A Reader Experience Review presents my journey through your story:

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  • The moments that pulled me in so much that I forgot I was reading.

    • Don't worry, I still remember to take notes.

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  • The characters I connect with.

    • Be it good or bad, because let's be real, sometimes the best origin stories are the villains.

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  • The questions I start asking along the way and the scenes that cause my attention to shift.

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